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MyAvatars 0.2   Debra Snider said on January 22, 2009

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Beautiful, sad, evocative & so visual. I’ve read it twice & will certainly be back to read it again. I especially like “you haven’t boxes big enough to pack the absence of his laughter” and “swinging clubs at the head of each new morning.” The “white linen/snowdrift/colder” beginning and ending image is also wonderful.

Debra Snider’s last blog post..Holiday Travels

MyAvatars 0.2   Jé Maverick said on January 23, 2009

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Thank you Debra. I’m glad you liked those lines. They were difficult to write.

MyAvatars 0.2   Emma Newman said on May 31, 2009

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I could rant and rave about how wonderful this was, but all the words that spring to mind to convey that sound wrong. perhaps it will suffice to say that when I read this, every hair on my body stood on end.

MyAvatars 0.2   Brosreview said on June 8, 2009

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Mate, these lines are so intensely emotional! Simply brilliant! Keep them coming!

Brosreview’s last blog post..Under the drowning sun

MyAvatars 0.2   Jé Maverick said on June 8, 2009

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@Emma: Thank you so much. I only hope that you enjoyed it half as much as I enjoyed your post about the minority report! ;)

@Brosreview: I’ll try to post her again soon. Life has taken me on a bit of a detour lately. But your words aren’t too bad either, you know. :)

Jé Maverick’s last blog post..The Things You Couldn’t Take - Confessional Poem

MyAvatars 0.2   Findingmywingsinlife said on June 13, 2009

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There are sometimes not enough words in this world to say what you mean to, and yet you’ve described and conveyed an array of emotions that are encompassed in this poem. It was very moving.

MyAvatars 0.2   Jé Maverick said on June 13, 2009

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Thanks a lot. Those wings in life? Hope you find them. :)

MyAvatars 0.2   Prof. Charles Harkwood said on November 27, 2009

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I love your work my friend. I was wondering if you would be interested in exchanging links with my blog, http://mellifluoustones.blogspot.com/. If you are, contact info can be found on the site.(I am reluctant to post my e-mail in a comments section, for fear of spam and such)

MyAvatars 0.2   Jé Maverick said on November 28, 2009

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Thank you. Yes, I shall visit, I’d love to. Take care. :)

MyAvatars 0.2   Alice Shapiro said on February 19, 2010

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Very, very good poem!

MyAvatars 0.2   Jé Maverick said on February 19, 2010

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Muchos gracias, Alice! :)

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